Tuesday 8 August 2017

THE DARKEST HOUR (Cry of an angel) Season 1 Episode 1

: Writer- BRIGHT DANIEL
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The gentle wind of the evening weather blew a hip of refuse randomly in the air. It was rush hour time: vehicles, people and other land locomotive technology moved to and fro on the road causing an unbearable hullabaloo. At the same time, hawkers joined them advertising and making sales for a living. One of them who carried a tray of plantain rushed a vehicle in motion. She wore a jean trouser which she folded at it's cross sectional area and a brown top which she also tied at it's base in a way her abdomen was slightly visible. She wasn't slim and short neither was she fat nor tall. She was a girl in her late 20s. On her feet were correct old canvas that enabled her pursue moving vehicles. As she ran, her buttocks kept bouncing until she stopped by the side of a customer in a driver seat who whined down the front glass of his car gazing at the plantains.
"How much are these?"
"Four hundred naira per square, sir" Monica, the girl responded.
"No, it's costly" the driver wanted to whine up the glass.
"Alright, let's bargain" Monica never gave up.
"Two hundred"
"Three fifty"
"Two fifty"
"Okay, bring three hundred and forty-five naira, sir"
Hearing that, the driver smiled causing a smile on Monica's face too. "Alright, give me the remaining three squares for three hundred naira each" he concluded.
Monica sold her remaining plantain happily then waved at the driver before crossing the road to meet her twin sister Udoka who was sitting sadly in front of an empty shop with her empty tray of plantain too. She looks exactly like her sister except that she was wearing a short jean trouser and a black top.
"Udoka, let's go home, I've sold the remaining plantain" Monica approached happily but Udoka showed no sign of happiness. "Are you okay? You look sad" she added yet, Udoka didn't say a word rather began to stand up. She stood simultaneously with her tray and said, "Listen Monica, I'm tired of being a hawker. I'm not coming back here again in the name of selling plantain. My mates are in the university and I'm here.." she hissed and walked out shaking her butt involuntarily without allowing her sister say a word. Though Monica couldn't say anything rather stared at her until she walked out.
"Udoka, wait for me nah!" she shouted and ran after her.
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The resident of these twins has a small gate, and inside the compound was a long horizontal building having seven rooms. Though it isn't a story building but made in a way it was higher than the ground. Before one enters each room, he/she has to climb four stairs. They were tenants in other rooms but none was seen outside except Trust and Sunday popularly known as Sunny. These two sat on a long bench in a way they faced each other playing puzzle (Draft). They wore longsleeve shirts without bucklling it up. Suddenly, Udoka banged the small metal gate opened thereby startling them. Even their puzzle-rings disorganized.
"My God!" Trust exclaimed wanting to fall.
"Bia, Monica or are you Udoka" Sunny began. "Have you lost your manners or did you sell it away with your plantain?!" he asked glaring at her.
Udoka didn't even stop, she glanced at them while still in motion and eventually entered into their own apartment.
"My friend, her name is Udoka not Monica" Trust corrected and sat up.
"But she behaves contrary to her name" Sunny faced Trust seriously.
"How?"
"The girl suppose to be peaceful because her name means 'Peace is Greater' but she's so troublesome!"
"That's how it should be"
"What?" Sunny stared at him. "Don't you know that someone's name should have a psychological effect on one's life? Chai..! No wonder!"
"No wonder what?" Trust also stared at him.
"It's because your name doesn't tarry with your character too"
"How?"
"Is your name not Trust?"
"It is"
"How many times have you betrayed me after trusting you?"
"Guy, leave that thing" Trust waved it off. Just then, Monica entered, she slowed down and greeted them with a smile.
"Welcome my dear Monica" Trust replied looking at her with his teeth widely opened but Sunny hit his leg hardly.
"Who's your dear?" he whispered angrily then looked at Monica. "My love.. sorry.. my dear, welcome" he said opening his teeth too.
"What has come over both of you today?" Monica asked with hands on her waist.
"Your beauty has come over me, for that, i can do anything for you" Sunny replied.
"Oya, i need 10k now" Monica stretched a hand forward while the other remained on her waist.
Hearing the amount 10k, Sunny focused on his game and began to whistle then Monica laughed and entered into the house. Even Trust couldn't help it too.
"This gir's behaviour tarry with her name oh" Trust said.
"I'm not surprise" Sunny began without looking up. "Her name means 'Money is Greater' and that's why she loves money a lot"
"I thought you like it when someone's behaviour tarry with her name"
"Not on money matter oh" Sunny concluded and Trust laughed seriously..
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TBC TOMORROW
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6 comments:

  1. Sure one Bro.... Always the best.... More Oil to your Brain jare

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  2. Nice work mr bright, pls make the story long and interesting

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  3. NICE ONE SIR BRIGHT, UR STORIES R ALWAYS D BEST!

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  4. Bro this is absolutely so interesting, good work, pls how do i follow up with you

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